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Looking for improvement This is the e-group critique board. If you post a picture here it will be assumed that you are looking for comprehensive technical feedback - both good and bad, but always respectful. Only post pictures here if you can deal with potentially negative constructive criticism. Anyone is qualified to comment and post feedback, and everyone is encouraged to do so. NB: "Looking for Improvement" is the place to post any pictures you would like advice on improving, no matter how bad you might think they are.

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Old 15th November 2010
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Re: Fetch!

Nice capture and scene, I wonder if the amount of bright colour in the scene has tricked the cameras exposure as it seems a bit dark overall.

But I like it, captures the dogs character.

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Re: Fetch!

I like this a lot but agree with Nick that it looks a bit dark.I think with a little bit of work this could be really good.
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Re: Fetch!

Good shot!

I tried downloading it and it looks a lot better than when viewed in the browser. No idea why - the colour space seems OK.
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Re: Fetch!

I also think it needs a play with the levels to increase the brightness, but other than that excellent photo
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Re: Fetch!

I love it , especially the way the background gradually peters out to infinity.

Like others I also recommend a wee nudge of saturation and levels to give it some bite.

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Re: Fetch!

I agree with all of those comments above...

Just needs a bit of tweaking to lighten/brighten the scene and make the dog really stand out.

You have a good shot there...very well captured. Nice one!

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Many thanks!
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