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Old 25th July 2009
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Money Paper Aeroplane

We have had quite a few rainy days lately, good ole british summer hey !

So decided to play around with some stock photos, let me know what you think of the below.



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Re: Money Paper Aeroplane

I don't think it will fly well - it's too nose heavy.

It is a neat idea, but maybe it has lost definition on the trailing edges of the wings - perhaps due to the exposure bias used. I wonder how it would work with a bit more contrast on the background.

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Re: Money Paper Aeroplane

Cheers Nick, yeah I may try again with a coloured background

and next time I'll see if it flys !
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