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Old 2nd October 2017
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The third (in-house) band in the hotel. I feel that these are the best results that I achieved. I found a way to get closer to the band, the lighting was a bit better (though badly balanced), and I got sharper and correct colours.

No 1:

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No 2:

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I prefer No 2 compositionally. The lighting was biased to the drummer and guitarist; and the singer, being in black, with black hair too, was sort of relegated by the lighting (I bet she was pleased - not...) In fact, the lighting was so odd, that in one shot (not on here), she appears to have a yellow-green glass eye!

Both of these were taken with the PL7 and 75-300R II.

Your thoughts? Many thanks.
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