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OK Feet first with a new Pen-F

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Media City Tram by Martin Grindley, on Flickr

Night Bridge by Martin Grindley, on Flickr

The Lowry by Martin Grindley, on Flickr

the Lowry at night by Martin Grindley, on Flickr
first and last 2 photos was straight off the camera using the colour wheel only a bit of straightening and cropping in lightroom
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Re: OK Feet first with a new Pen-F

In the first photo I'm glad the tram was moving away from you.

A nice set of photos.



BTW, if you add a carriage return after the image url] it would look better with the photo description under it. Just me being picky though.
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Re: OK Feet first with a new Pen-F

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In the first photo I'm glad the tram was moving away from you.

A nice set of photos.



BTW, if you add a carriage return after the image url] it would look better with the photo description under it. Just me being picky though.
bit like that
yes it was moving away but I cropped the tram buffers out of the photo
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Re: OK Feet first with a new Pen-F

Love the second image. Nice set
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Re: OK Feet first with a new Pen-F

Welcome and nice start!
Love the tram shot - if I were to suggest anything then cropping closer in to make it more prominent might work better?
The bridge is very good too - great star bursts, I have the 17mm f1.8 so I need to experiment with stopping that down for night shots
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Re: OK Feet first with a new Pen-F

I see you've got night photography sorted, nice work.
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I see you've got night photography sorted, nice work.
Sort of yes but I don't do enough really, this was taken on the same trip but not with the new Pen-F, my old trusty E-M10 which I love, I want to know how to avoid the burn out that I was getting to the BBC signs at the top of the buildings, this was a HDR composite from a single RAW file, I don't tend to like HDR images much so I thought I would try some

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Salford quay-2 by Martin Grindley, on Flickr
again, trusty old E-M10 mki
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back to the Pen-F

Manchester street Poet by Martin Grindley, on Flickr

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Re: OK Feet first with a new Pen-F

Two interesting photos.

An Aunt recently passed away & she had a typewriter in her belongings. We didn't keep it though. We have too much stuff already.

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First time I have seen a typewriter with a wi-fi aerial ...

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