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Old 16th December 2014
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Village church project

I've been working on a body of work about our village church. I wondered what you think of these.




There are rather more than these, and of course they're meant to be viewed as a body of work rather than individual images. However, your thoughts would be welcome.
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Re: Village church project

oooh ! I do so lurve No.3 the detail of vintage is dramatic
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Re: Village church project

#3 is the pick of these. I would have liked to see the whole of the knocker (for want of the correct technical term for these things. )
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Re: Village church project

Again #3 is lovely,a b@w conversion would possibly be nice,i know the shadows on 2 and 4 or of arches ect but i cant see past them!
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Re: Village church project

Some interesting angles and details. None stand out for me on their own, but I appreciate they are part of a body of work and I should think that they look good in that context, each making an important contribution towards the whole project.

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Re: Village church project

These are lovely, well composed images, Keith. Colours and lighting have rendered rich textures.
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