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In the pier

From the Albufera, a lake here in Valencia.

It was shot with a modified fisheye Samyang 8mm F/2.8 lens for M4/3

embarcadero 1 by Arturo, en Flickr
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Re: In the pier

The juxtaposition of the two figures make this one a stand-out, are they posed, or just excellent timing, or a little bit of luck ?
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Re: In the pier

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The juxtaposition of the two figures make this one a stand-out, are they posed, or just excellent timing, or a little bit of luck ?
Probably a bit of all of the above, but whatever it was it was a case of being in the right place at the right time... and having a camera to hand.
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Probably a bit of all of the above, but whatever it was it was a case of being in the right place at the right time... and having a camera to hand.

You're right
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Re: In the pier

Nah - he was taking a shot of her - she was taking a shot of him - so ye moc shot two of them with one wide angle
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Nah - Ye Moc was taking a shot of her - she was taking a shot of him - so ye moc shot two of them with one wide angle
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Re: In the pier

Aye rite! Back to the picture! a nice shot different to the usual walkway shots well spotted and executed.

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Aye rite! Back to the picture! a nice shot different to the usual walkway shots well spotted and executed.

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Quite right - I was going to mention that - The tonal values are good too - nice one
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Re: In the pier

Colored shot is less impressive. At first time I thought to delete it but I turned it into b&w and it improved a lot.

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