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Looking for improvement This is the e-group critique board. If you post a picture here it will be assumed that you are looking for comprehensive technical feedback - both good and bad, but always respectful. Only post pictures here if you can deal with potentially negative constructive criticism. Anyone is qualified to comment and post feedback, and everyone is encouraged to do so. NB: "Looking for Improvement" is the place to post any pictures you would like advice on improving, no matter how bad you might think they are.

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In a Clearing

Like the robin but the Holly worries me...WDYT
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Re: In a Clearing

Beautiful ! Love your Robin shots ! however the Holly does take the eye away, maybe "lose" the holly?
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Re: In a Clearing

Thanks...I tried cloning it out and got in a mess...he he
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Re: In a Clearing

The holly doesn't worry me at all. It's blurred enough too be background, and at the same time it gives information about the environment around the bird.
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Re: In a Clearing

Burn the edges down and dim down the bright patch mid left...crackin' sharpness
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