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Looking for improvement This is the e-group critique board. If you post a picture here it will be assumed that you are looking for comprehensive technical feedback - both good and bad, but always respectful. Only post pictures here if you can deal with potentially negative constructive criticism. Anyone is qualified to comment and post feedback, and everyone is encouraged to do so. NB: "Looking for Improvement" is the place to post any pictures you would like advice on improving, no matter how bad you might think they are.

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Old 17th June 2014
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a few sample pics

hi, just wondering if i can get some constructive criticisms and/or opinions. Pictures taken with epl3 or epl5.



fire pit during a trip to the Canadian Rockies



Finding mini little nippers on north vancouver beaches.



staged indoor climbing shot, edited to make colours 'pop' a little more.

Thanks in advance.
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Re: a few sample pics

I like No3 it's a nice composition.
As for improvement I can only suggest in No 2 to have used fill in flsh and straighten the horizon. I think both the crabs and the boys face need to be sharp...or the boys face could be really blurred to extenuate the focus on the crabs.....just my thoughts.
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