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Looking for improvement This is the e-group critique board. If you post a picture here it will be assumed that you are looking for comprehensive technical feedback - both good and bad, but always respectful. Only post pictures here if you can deal with potentially negative constructive criticism. Anyone is qualified to comment and post feedback, and everyone is encouraged to do so. NB: "Looking for Improvement" is the place to post any pictures you would like advice on improving, no matter how bad you might think they are.

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Re: Two images

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Prefer the first. on the second the top seems too busy and does not contribute to the overall image. Just my view of course
I'm quite the opposite

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Re: Two images

Blimey, I posted these in February and still getting comments. Thanks guys.
I agree with the majority, the first one.
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Re: Two images

#1 has the nicer greens but #2 cropped square (loose top and bottom) has the better composition.
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Re: Two images

No cropping of No.2 needed for me. The way the path leads you in is perfect for the vertical framing and the canopy above adds real dimension and perspective.

I really can't understand why No.1 is the favourite here!

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