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Looking for improvement This is the e-group critique board. If you post a picture here it will be assumed that you are looking for comprehensive technical feedback - both good and bad, but always respectful. Only post pictures here if you can deal with potentially negative constructive criticism. Anyone is qualified to comment and post feedback, and everyone is encouraged to do so. NB: "Looking for Improvement" is the place to post any pictures you would like advice on improving, no matter how bad you might think they are.

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Old 14th May 2014
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Shades of Black.

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Re: Shades of Black.

As it's in LFI ...

For me, there's not enough isolation between the Lion and the background. Also, and it may just be the conversion process you've used, it appears a bit over-sharpened. Oh, and I don't like the frame. But I rarely like any frame.
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Re: Shades of Black.

The lion really needs to stand out from the background and all those hot spots need toning down.
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Re: Shades of Black.

for me the bnw effect doesnt really stand out!
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