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Old 30th October 2012
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Crummock water

Here are some shots I took yesterday morning around Crummock water.

On the way there


Mist and Crummock water from distance by alf.branch, on Flickr

As I was driving along crummcok


Mist and Crummock water by alf.branch, on FlickrWhen the light had changed after being to Buttermere.


Crummock water autumn panorama by alf.branch, on FlickrAs always all C&C welcome
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Re: Crummock water

Beautiful compositions, maybe the shadows could be lightened in No 1.
I dont think the darker left 20% of No 3 adds anything - just my opinion.
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Re: Crummock water

Three good images - my favourite is the second as it has just about everything you want in a landscape.

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Re: Crummock water

Thanks for the comments
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