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Old 31st May 2012
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Re: Model shoot on Brighton Beach bandstand

Hi Ian. I agree with Dave, that ideally, the model would have been better positioned had she been over to the right of the picture and looking in.
But given this is the picture we have, I would suggest removing the black part of the column in the top left corner by cropping the picture. Also, I would suggest there is too much "white" area over to the right side. Here, I would suggest cropping over to the right column so that the crop runs down part of the column, this would frame the picture keeping the viewer looking into picture and wondering off out to the right.
I would add I am no expert, just an amateur, and making hopefully constructive comments.
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Pault
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