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beckyi90 20th August 2014 11:12 PM

spider on a weed
 
wasnt getting much luck with the sunset shots and found this little guy. Only had my kit lens on me but made the best I think.

Square cropped as the edge just had a messy second leaf thing, booted the colour very slightly to bring out the blue. opinions please.

https://farm4.staticflickr.com/3850/...8036f10391.jpgdandelion spider sqcrp by B-Adhoc, on Flickr

Phill D 21st August 2014 06:14 AM

Re: spider on a weed
 
Looks goo to me. You could crop it a bit closer too so the spider is more of the focus.

Zuiko 21st August 2014 09:22 AM

Re: spider on a weed
 
I think the crop is fine - perfect, even. I'm not sure if I like the faint trace of yellow still visible in the flowers and wonder if it would be better to have either a little more of the colour or a true silhouette. I like this picture very much indeed.


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