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Llangorse Village


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Cropped a little, dehazed a little, and general LR6 tweaks.....

Can see that bush at the bottom should have been cut.
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Re: Llangorse Village

Lovely. Llangorse Lake is a beautiful location especially at dusk or dawn.
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Re: Llangorse Village

I've been sailing on the lake on more than a few occasions.
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Years ago, 40+, I used to teach sailing there with PGL...
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Re: Llangorse Village

Leave the bush in as it give s a sense of depth. Clone out the white streak across the water as its too distracting. Needs a bit more punch - try more contrast maybe!


If you fancy, drop in a more interesting sky too



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Re: Llangorse Village

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Leave the bush in as it give s a sense of depth. Clone out the white streak across the water as its too distracting. Needs a bit more punch - try more contrast maybe!


If you fancy, drop in a more interesting sky too



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Why stop there ? Add a speedboat to the white streak, few ducks, some grazing cattle, more sheep, a few contrails, and a couple of raptors

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