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Looking for improvement This is the e-group critique board. If you post a picture here it will be assumed that you are looking for comprehensive technical feedback - both good and bad, but always respectful. Only post pictures here if you can deal with potentially negative constructive criticism. Anyone is qualified to comment and post feedback, and everyone is encouraged to do so. NB: "Looking for Improvement" is the place to post any pictures you would like advice on improving, no matter how bad you might think they are.

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Tess is a rescue dog my Son is fostering, taken by window light with the 45mm f/1.8 and converted to B&W.

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A beautiful portrait Paul.
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Re: Tess

Great clarity from that wonderful lens, and a good conversion.
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That is fab Paul
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Re: Tess

Nice shot like the eye detail
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Re: Tess

WoW ! Paul what an amazing image ! and from this GREAT lens
lovely dog
ps I know your a great Tog too
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Re: Tess

I like this, good composition with the bend in the neck sweeping round through the face and to the end of the nose....cant think how to improve it though sorry.
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Re: Tess

Lovely shot. Maybe it is cropped a little too tight, the ear has a tiny bit missing.
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Re: Tess

Yes, I agree with the above comments - superb clarity and lighting, but that clip round the ear needs sorting (IMHO, of course)
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Re: Tess

Thanks for the comments folks.

I wondered when somebody would pick up on the ear.

I was sitting on the settee photographing the grandkids playing when she jumped up next to me to look out the window for a split second, prime lens that filled the frame and no room to recompose by moving back and have not got another one I can patch a bit of ear of onto it from, so it stays as it is I'm afraid.
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Re: Tess

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I like this, good composition with the bend in the neck sweeping round through the face and to the end of the nose....cant think how to improve it though sorry.
Ahh perhaps Paul needs to "train this Model" to the perfection poses he gains with the "girls"
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Re: Tess

Lovely shot and processing :-)

As you can't "unclip" the ear, maybe crop it a bit more to make it look deliberate - perhaps using the curve of the top of the head as a guide ?

Could you smooth the background a tiny tad more, too ?
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Re: Tess

Good picture of a dog with eyeball.
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Re: Tess

Yet another great portrait Paul, I like it A LOT

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Re: Tess

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