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Delphinium with improvements

How about this one Pete?
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Re: Delphinium with improvements

Yes that looks good to me Dave.

A nice composition and subtle colour.

However I do question why you shot at f22 with an exposure of only 1/10 sec. Whilst that excellent lens has resolved the fine hairs on the stalks there is a bit of a feeling of softness and I wonder if this is due to diffraction. Maybe f11 would still have given adequate DOF (and a faster shutter speed).

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Re: Delphinium with improvements

I did it at f22 to get the DOF, but you are correct, f 11 would have done it OK.
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