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The Giant's Causeway

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A shot taken at the beautiful Giant's Causeway of N.Ireland; a wonder to be at, a wonder to see, and a wonder to shoot!

Let me know your thoughts

PS. Sorry for the small image, I'm not familiar with uploading/inserting a full size image here.
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Re: The Giant's Causeway

Its a magnificent shot. Works really well straight on.
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Re: The Giant's Causeway

Love the shot.

Do not who to acredit the comment to regarding the Causeway

" worth seeing but not worth going to see"

You shot makes that statement a joke.

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Re: The Giant's Causeway

Nicely captured, leading up through the picture, through the figure to the moon, all in perfect alignment. Very well done.

I'm just a little unsure whether I actually like the figure in the picture.
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Re: The Giant's Causeway

Wonderful shot. The figure adds interest and a sense of scale.
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Re: The Giant's Causeway

Fantastic shot. Would love to see a larger version, the one here and on Instagram doesn't do it justice. It needs to be seen large on a poster IMHO
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Re: The Giant's Causeway

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Its a magnificent shot. Works really well straight on.
Thank you for your kind words

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Love the shot.

Do not who to acredit the comment to regarding the Causeway

" worth seeing but not worth going to see"

You shot makes that statement a joke.

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Thanks, glad you like it

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Nicely captured, leading up through the picture, through the figure to the moon, all in perfect alignment. Very well done.

I'm just a little unsure whether I actually like the figure in the picture.
Thank you very much, I'm an architect who is fussy with alignments haha
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Wonderful shot. The figure adds interest and a sense of scale.
Thanks, I generally use a figure to add a bit of scale/context

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Fantastic shot. Would love to see a larger version, the one here and on Instagram doesn't do it justice. It needs to be seen large on a poster IMHO
Thank you, but I am not too familiar with how to post the full res version here. I would also love to print it out large, but not sure how large it could print, never printed at large scale.
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Re: The Giant's Causeway

Lovely shot, you had to wait to get that one!
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The Giants causeway at dusk are 13 to the dozen. Your human element separates it from those.

However, I would try to recover more from the dark area just below the person.

Take a look at this. and you may see what I mean.

I'd would happily hang your picture on the wall
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