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Looking for improvement This is the e-group critique board. If you post a picture here it will be assumed that you are looking for comprehensive technical feedback - both good and bad, but always respectful. Only post pictures here if you can deal with potentially negative constructive criticism. Anyone is qualified to comment and post feedback, and everyone is encouraged to do so. NB: "Looking for Improvement" is the place to post any pictures you would like advice on improving, no matter how bad you might think they are.

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Old 27th February 2014
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Re: Which pic to win a prize?

No 4 is best creatively and No 3 for impact....I don't think 1 or 2 as they are not in the same league in my opinion (I've purposefully not read previous comments above in case they influenced my view - Ill read them now)
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Re: Which pic to win a prize?

I like No4, John, not only does it have impact, it also raises the question of where all these young ladies are going ......................
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Re: Which pic to win a prize?

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No 4 is best creatively and No 3 for impact....I don't think 1 or 2 as they are not in the same league in my opinion (I've purposefully not read previous comments above in case they influenced my view - Ill read them now)
Thanks Brian, when you read the comments you'll see they echo what you just said.
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I like No4, John, not only does it have impact, it also raises the question of where all these young ladies are going ......................
They were running away from me, David, I have that effect on them - even my wife.
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Re: Which pic to win a prize?

The third, I like the 'eyes in the direction of the officer' but it vis a shame that the placard has been cropped.
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Re: Which pic to win a prize?

Number 3, but do you have the rest of the number 5 on the banner as that would add a lot in my opinion.

Edit - just read the rest of the replies to see many have already said much the same as me..
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Re: Which pic to win a prize?

Thanks John try a crop just on the edge of the placard and stay with B&W
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