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Re: Juggling with fire and long flames

This captures the atmosphere very well and it's a nice touch to include the audience. It's therefore maybe not a case of improvement but what you might have done differently. For example, you could have zoomed in on the performers to make them the main subject, but I'm sure you got some other shots doing just that and in this case it would be a shame to dispense with the spectators.
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