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OlyPaul 28th June 2014 04:15 PM

Tess
 
Tess is a rescue dog my Son is fostering, taken by window light with the 45mm f/1.8 and converted to B&W.

http://e-group.uk.net/gallery/data/1..._E-M5_copy.jpg

Anne 28th June 2014 04:21 PM

Re: Tess
 
A beautiful portrait Paul.

StephenL 28th June 2014 04:32 PM

Re: Tess
 
Great clarity from that wonderful lens, and a good conversion.

gregles 28th June 2014 04:39 PM

Re: Tess
 
That is fab Paul:cool:

Wee man 28th June 2014 07:17 PM

Re: Tess
 
Nice shot like the eye detail

Chevvyf1 28th June 2014 07:39 PM

Re: Tess
 
WoW ! Paul what an amazing image ! and from this GREAT lens :)
lovely dog :)
ps I know your a great Tog too :)

brianvickers 28th June 2014 08:28 PM

Re: Tess
 
I like this, good composition with the bend in the neck sweeping round through the face and to the end of the nose....cant think how to improve it though sorry.

sapper 29th June 2014 08:04 AM

Re: Tess
 
Lovely shot. Maybe it is cropped a little too tight, the ear has a tiny bit missing.

jdal 29th June 2014 09:29 AM

Re: Tess
 
Yes, I agree with the above comments - superb clarity and lighting, but that clip round the ear needs sorting (IMHO, of course)

OlyPaul 29th June 2014 12:54 PM

Re: Tess
 
Thanks for the comments folks.:)

I wondered when somebody would pick up on the ear.;)

I was sitting on the settee photographing the grandkids playing when she jumped up next to me to look out the window for a split second, prime lens that filled the frame and no room to recompose by moving back and have not got another one I can patch a bit of ear of onto it from, so it stays as it is I'm afraid.:)

Chevvyf1 29th June 2014 03:15 PM

Re: Tess
 
Quote:

Originally Posted by brianvickers (Post 300053)
I like this, good composition with the bend in the neck sweeping round through the face and to the end of the nose....cant think how to improve it though sorry.

Ahh perhaps Paul needs to "train this Model" to the perfection poses he gains with the "girls" :D *chr

Kami 30th June 2014 04:48 PM

Re: Tess
 
Lovely shot and processing :-)

As you can't "unclip" the ear, maybe crop it a bit more to make it look deliberate - perhaps using the curve of the top of the head as a guide ?

Could you smooth the background a tiny tad more, too ?

Ulfric M Douglas 30th June 2014 05:56 PM

Re: Tess
 
Good picture of a dog with eyeball.

Simon Bee 30th June 2014 07:48 PM

Re: Tess
 
Yet another great portrait Paul, I like it A LOT *yes

Regards, Simon

OlyPaul 4th July 2014 01:44 PM

Re: Tess
 
Thank you guys.:)


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