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B.P.S Studios
20th November 2008, 12:23 PM

20th November 2008, 12:28 PM
Although I am not really into studio work I think this image has real appeal. My only comment is that the hair passing over the shoulder has lost its detail in the shoulder area by perhaps being over-exposed here.

20th November 2008, 01:52 PM
I honestly don't have a thing about ears, but this one I'd crop just in front of the ear to turn it into a conventional portrate. For me everything to the right and including the ear is distracting me from the models' face. She has a lovely face and you have presented her well, so I really don't want to see anything else.


20th November 2008, 11:34 PM
I'm very capable of saying the wrong thing (ask Nick!), but I think the posture makes her look a bit like a swimmer about to dive in, it's quite unnatural. But then I know absolutely nothing about studio work and nothing about taking photographs of women, because I've done neither. So I probably ought to keep quiet. :o