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B.P.S Studios
13th November 2008, 12:09 PM
http://e-group.uk.net/gallery/data/503/medium/double.jpg


Advice and Comments Welcome

Chillimonster
13th November 2008, 01:05 PM
Very Arty, although i feel it may have been better if the highlights on the models ear were not there and that part of the image was 'in-black' as it would serve as a natural vignette for the image and draw the eye to the centre of the frame.

I could imagine this as a poster that you would get from somehwere such as Athena etc


Thanks for sharing


Chris

Graham_of_Rainham
13th November 2008, 01:18 PM
The composition of the original image is really very good and lends itself well to the construction of this image.

As it is so obviously a constructed image there are several things I would do with it...

The ears are really distracting and I'd clone them out, along with the catchlights on the dark areas on the breasts. I would really like to see something done to the bright light along the lines of having a old flood light with 4 barn doors as the source. I couldn't quickly find a suitable image of one to drop into this so I used a "Flash-n-Brolly" to illustrate my idea.

I think if done well this has very good potential as an image.

Of course to really make it a great image you need Twins...:)

http://e-group.uk.net/gallery/data/500/double_copy.jpg (http://e-group.uk.net/gallery/showphoto.php/photo/9901)

This is a 5 minute draft for illustration of ideas and I'll delete if if you object.

*chr

B.P.S Studios
20th November 2008, 12:22 PM
Thanks for the feedback guys. I have since totally reworked this image and will repost the results today.

photo_owl
20th November 2008, 12:41 PM
if you could do something with the chins it would help to - at the end of the day the model has to look attractive too to make such shots really work.

i may not be in agreement with the defined light source thingy - but that would depend on the thingy! A horizontally opening door (trapdoor) with light coming through might add something.....