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B.P.S Studios
25th July 2008, 05:22 PM
http://e-group.uk.net/gallery/data/503/medium/Library---0563--B_W-web.jpg

Graham_of_Rainham
25th July 2008, 09:45 PM
I truly believe you need to re-post this image without the words. Unless of course this is a "Graphic" or "Poster" style on which you are seeking comments.

As an image without the words I like very much the composition. The hair however has me wanting to see just that little bit more of its detail. the shadow tells us that there is a full length and hint of a hi-light on the head shows us that there is volumn. I think the hair needs to be just perceptable to really present the subject to best effect.

*chr

ndl0071
26th July 2008, 07:31 AM
Yes, in general I like to composition but do agree with Graham regarding the tweaking, any chance of posting a revised pic?

B.P.S Studios
1st August 2008, 05:53 PM
http://e-group.uk.net/gallery/data/503/medium/01-w.jpg


Image repost