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B.P.S Studios
8th May 2008, 04:07 PM
http://e-group.uk.net/gallery/data/503/medium/5-musical-web.jpg


Feedback welcome

shenstone
8th May 2008, 08:50 PM
Sorry Ian

Not a top notch shot in my opinion

IMHO, the Girl is in a dynamic pose and the colours are good, but the Guy just looks wooden and adds notthing to the picture. To be honest he looks like he's a lost kid who walked into shot to look at the girl.

You have many better shots in your gallery. If you had put one like this in the looking for perfection forum section I would have been more effusive

http://e-group.uk.net/gallery/data/503/Jade-B_W-Version3.jpg (http://e-group.uk.net/gallery/showphoto.php/photo/4487)

Regards
Andy

B.P.S Studios
9th May 2008, 04:26 PM
I wasn't sure about the guy at the time, in fact I had cropped him out altogether but for some reason unknown to everybody but myself I put him back in. I think your right he does look like a lost soul.

Thanks for the feedback

Nivek
11th May 2008, 04:57 AM
I do agree with you over the first shot, although the exposure etc is pretty good he looks as though he has seen a ghost. You should have waited until he said something or he was maybe more animated.

As for the second black and white shot the models eye is burned out in my opinion and her face is quiet blotchy, seems like you have been using the clone tool on her cheeks and overdone it slightly. This is just my opinion of course.

Kevin